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giandujakissI have made some revisions to my first vid, Undone (The Sweater Song), based on the feedback I received. I wasn't able to fix all of the flaws, even though I agreed with most commenters, simply because in some cases, I was unable to come up with a solution that I preferred to the original.
Most commenters observed that the opening and closing montages seemed very long, and so I tried to fix the problem with additional clips and tighter editing. It's not shorter, of course, but I'm hoping it will seem that way. Anyway, I definitely think this is a better version, so thank you everyone!
Song: Undone (The Sweater Song) by Weezer
Fandom: Highlander
Pairing: D/M
Summary: Did you ever notice that Methos wears a lot of sweaters?
Length: 5:05
Format: .wmv
Location: Download from Sendspace
(originally posted here)
Most commenters observed that the opening and closing montages seemed very long, and so I tried to fix the problem with additional clips and tighter editing. It's not shorter, of course, but I'm hoping it will seem that way. Anyway, I definitely think this is a better version, so thank you everyone!
Song: Undone (The Sweater Song) by Weezer
Fandom: Highlander
Pairing: D/M
Summary: Did you ever notice that Methos wears a lot of sweaters?
Length: 5:05
Format: .wmv
Location: Download from Sendspace
(originally posted here)
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Date: 2013-12-13 08:30 pm (UTC)